this looks really good, just reread that passage last night, and I felt so sorry for her
oh well, good job

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Great job, I love your HP arts.

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So emotive, I adore this.

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"you do care; you care so much you feel as though you will bleed to death with the pain of it."
photography. drawing. harry potter. retro.

Aww . . . Hermioneeeee . . . I felt so bad for her in that chapter. But I love it that she had enough gumption to sic a flock of canaries on Ron-the-Jerk ^_~
The pose and the colors really convey the mood well. The little birds are very cute! And indeed - nice shoes. ^_~

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oh wow yes, I agree with Stacy, the colours match me mood very very well indeedy.
I LOVE how you made her legs cross....I always try to make that look right and it just never does. AND boy did you make it look fabulous. The shoes are wonderful too. And I love how the moon is just peaking in through the window a little bit and you can see the stars. Very well done. I love this

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"..Dumbledores 'man' through and through."

SNAPE IS INNOCENT!
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I <3 her hair. It's such a tangle, like mine. Perfect.
The mood and background is great. Props on using yellow for the cute birdies and toning them down to not disturb the melancholy.

you said you have a problem with profiles? you might want to push in the chin for female profiles or make them rounder, making them look a little more feminine, delicate. Come and smack me if i'm being to critical but you might also want to make the forehead a little less long and her chest looks a little funky, you might want to try lowering it just a tad, so it doesn't look like its sprouting out of her collar bone. The background and her expression and the absolute dejection you got across in her body was amazing...you're birdies are so cute! Like i said, if i'm to critical just come and smack me!

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prurient- adj. Fancy way of saying 'dirty'. See also: perverted, hentai.

Oh but you have no idea how much I appreciate your critique!! Thanks a bunch for your suggestions, I totally agree with you about the chest and chin and things. Thanks again!

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phew...i wasn't sure if you were one of those people who were a ticking time bomb about your art...its nice to find the ones open to suggestion! btw...can you give me ideas for backgrounds and how to color them? i thought yours was amazing!

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prurient- adj. Fancy way of saying 'dirty'. See also: perverted, hentai.